Beat Enhancements
Draft 2:
Draft 1:
When one envisions baking, stereotypically, an elderly woman in a patterned- pastel apron often comes to mind. Obtain valuable baking insight from someone vastly disparate than the norm starting with yours truly, Ava Elise! Get ready to break out the whisks and bowls, my proteges! I am not afraid to stir the pot both in and out of the kitchen. From red velvet brownies, to Keto cinnamon rolls, I tackle everything. Come one, come all! Life is short, so I encourage you to lick the bowl! Bon appetit!
Draft 1:
When one envisions baking, stereotypically, an elderly woman
in a patterned- pastel apron often comes to mind. Why not stray away from the
clichés, and obtain valuable baking insight from someone vastly disparate than the
norm starting with yours truly, Ava Elise!
Same as with the autobio, I think the second draft is going in a good direction. I like the addition of some recipes we might find on the blog! The only suggestion I'd make is to swap the lines after "why not stray..." that tell us about you. I might even remove the "get ready..." in favor of getting to "stir the pot."
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous idea! Thank you!
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