What a cool persona! I like how you added different images to help express who he is.
One suggestion would be to make the Goal section a little clearer. Your word choice is a little confusing, so maybe put them in a sentence structure. For instance, “1. Wants to successfully master recipes, 2. Wants to impress his wife with new skills, 3. Make himself proud, 4. Keep busy throughout his retirement”
What a cool persona! I like how you added different images to help express who he is.
ReplyDeleteOne suggestion would be to make the Goal section a little clearer. Your word choice is a little confusing, so maybe put them in a sentence structure. For instance, “1. Wants to successfully master recipes, 2. Wants to impress his wife with new skills, 3. Make himself proud, 4. Keep busy throughout his retirement”